Talk:Daniel Wood/FA Discussion

Wood, Daniel

• Support as nominator: Believe this page is how a character page should be, relevant to the character, as well as providing enough historic and present information about the character to build a picture of them. As well as keeping track of the Independence's mission and what the character did to contribute on the mission. --Danielwood7 16:08, 11 May 2008 (EDT)
  • Support as nominator: All comments have been taken under the wing and changed. --Danielwood7 18:11, 12 May 2008 (EDT)
    • Comment: Although I've fixed the majority of typos so far, there are commas, apostrophes, etc in the wrong places, sentences that don't make sense... Not close to perfect yet. - Lt. Salak^Talk 19:51, 12 May 2008 (EDT)
      • Comment:I agree with Salak. He and I have spent several hours today editing out the spelling, grammar, and punctuation mistakes and its still not anywhere near perfect.Karynn Ehlanii 23:50, 12 May 2008 (EDT)
  • Comment: Still unsure about the readability of the headers in the right nav; blue on gray doesn't work too well. Also, at the bottom, the last few ranks aren't needed given they haven't been attained yet. Fix the nav at least, and I'll support. - Lt. Salak^Talk 17:57, 11 May 2008 (EDT)
    • Support: following nav colour changes. - Lt. Salak^Talk 18:17, 11 May 2008 (EDT)
      • Mild oppose: Now I've looked at it when not too busy, I can see a fair few typos too. Same reasons as Ehlanii. - Lt. Salak^Talk 13:07, 12 May 2008 (EDT)
  • Oppose: There are numerous grammatical (and other) mistakes in the prose sections, most notably in the Character History, that make reading these passages clumsy at best. A featured article should be free from these difficulties. If these were cleared up, I would probably support the nomination, but right now I cannot in good conscience. Karynn Ehlanii 12:55, 12 May 2008 (EDT)
    • Comment: I'm concerned that there are several times when canon and semi-canon characters and ships are mentioned. For example, I wonder when Daniel would have had the chance to play piano for Lt. Cmdr. Data, particularly since Data died prior to Captain Riker assuming command of the USS Titan. I also wonder why, in direct contradiction to other pages on the Wiki, Cadet Wood served on the Titan. Additionally, some of the information on this page seems to be redundant, most notably in the Counselor's notes and the Rank History. It may be advisable to move the Rank History to a subpage. Karynn Ehlanii 23:44, 12 May 2008 (EDT)

Result: Nomination withdrawn - Lt. Salak^Talk 18:39, 13 May 2008 (EDT)